Tuesday, June 14, 2022

Planning - Pitch Feedback and Ideas

  


Feedback
  • Have 'Jean' be cheered up by something simple, such as her friend giving her a flower instead of being cheered up by material things such as designer shopping. Designer cloths being a source of happiness may come across as tacky and superficial, and will go against the authenticity of the band.
  • Think about the aesthetic of the band and how it's represented in the website. Also how you will introduce the members and their identities on the website.
  • Need to think of an idea for the 30 second audio visual feature on the website. 
  • Many women remove facial hair but do it in an ironic way where its funny. Instead of facial hair have her shave her leg hair.
  • Simplify your ideas.
Ideas:
  • You make an intertextual reference to Mamma Mia where the main character fails to shave her legs and comes to her mother for help. This would work well as in this scene the main character is worrying about her appearance just like 'Jean' is when she goes out to buy branded cloths.
  • Change the Narrative to Jean waking up and deciding to buy a new wardrobe of designer cloths, which my aspirational middle market audience would want and be able to do. Once she has bough all these cloths she goes home and realises that they didn't make her happy, what did was something simple like someone giving her a flower, possibly the band.
  • I thought I could possibly have an interview with the band saying why they partnered with the mental health charity and why they care about mental health,.
    Shaving Scene from Mamma Mia

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