CS - Changed Scene
NS - New Scene
I devised a new narrative based on the feedback from my pitch.
The new narrative follows 'Jean' as she wakes up early to go out and buy a new wardrobe of designer cloths. (I decided tut the friend characters to simplify the narrative) Once she has bought all of her new cloths she realises that they did not make her happy and goes home disheartened. At the very end the band gives her a flower which makes her happier than all of the cloths ever could.
Edit: I have decided to get rid of the sunset and sunrise shots as I feel it complicates the narrative and makes the shooting process less practical as I have to worry about getting those shots and also making the shots nearer the end slightly dimmer to indicate night time, which makes the whole process more complicated.
With the bouquet that I added near the end of the video I plan to make an intertextual reference to an album cover by a band Her's. To make this clear I will use mainly pink and white flowers and a close up shot.
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